Novel beginnings - part 1

I am posting up what is currently the first two chapters of a novel I have been working on for about 2 years... I say "working on" because I haven't touched it for months... Maybe posting it here for public scrutiny will light a fire:       [by GP]

The Intentions

For far too long two individuals have squandered intellect, impact and intuition.  Ideally this venue provides an outlet for their rants, diatribes, harangues, stories, views, meanderings, *sighs*, spiels, and other communicas that are deemed view-able to the world.